Agriculture, food risk and data analytics
SaaS software for B2B
Helping food and beverage manufacturers and agriculture industry leaders mitigate risks in their supply chains and improve consumer safety through an easy-to-use data analytics platform.
OVERVIEW
Role
UX Writer & Content Strategist, Experience Design
Goal
Launch a new platform to analyze supply chain metrics and highlight food safety and contamination risks, turning hard data into digestible visuals and actionable insights.
Impact
Transformed jargon into natural language—reducing cognitive load for the user
Improved findability and scannability of content
Created a glossary of industry terms to speed up understanding
Content designed to mitigate user confusion and increase trust
PROBLEM
How might we turn complex data into valuable insights that can be easy to understand quickly by supply chain and logistics experts, chief financial officers and other business stakeholders—all with varied levels of industry knowledge?
PROCESS
Focusing on principles
Findable
• Deliver copy to ensure consistent information architecture and recognizable content patterns
Clear
• Clear content with everyday language
Helpful
• Actionable insights to protect companies from liabilities and consumers from food safety risks
How I worked
Collaborators
• Product manager
• Team of engineers and QA
• Product designer
• Information architect
• UX lead
• UX design director
Work I did
• Led UX writing and content design
• Wrote UI instructional text and tooltips
• Performed a content audit of all data viz and labels for consistency and to improve information architecture
• Content designed help center and comprehensive glossary
Skills/software used
• InVision
• Google Suite
• Competitive research
1 Empathize
Users have both emotional and practical goals when looking for their next hearing aid.
2 Strategy
Considering user and business goals
I wanted to ensure we convey value to the user, helping them meet their goals of hearing better and finding the right product. At the same time, I used strategic messaging that balanced business and customer goals to deliver results.
3 Research
Earlier homepage research and A/B testing revealed the top product value props for users:
• Discreetness
• Size
• Sound quality
I used messaged these value props through key landing pages, including home, the product detail page and product listing pages.
4 Iterate
I took the product positioning and key value props and turned them into user focused messaging and UX copy rather than product focused in past launches.
Deciding on the winning concept
• Went with concept A information architecture (IA) based on research findings
Refining the content based on the research
• Iterated on copy including order of value props, added CTA button copy like "Customize your plan" to highlight No. 2 most appealing value prop (Customized payment plans)
• Went through multiple stakeholder rounds of feedback, including with the Co-CEO and brand VPs, director, and managers.
5 Handoff
Compliance review & dev handoff
• Facing challenges of whether debt relief is a debt consolidation product or not, I initially prepared prototypes where
1. debt relief was in the same product section as loan products 2. debt relief was separate
• Legal & compliance decided debt relief was debt consolidation so I used the prototype where there was only one product section
• Used compliance doc as a source of truth for final copy for dev handoff
Handing off the final version
• Created a compliance document for compliance review to note the before and after copy changes
• Compliance docs are often used as the source of truth for final copy for our development team
Launching the live version
• Here’s the live version on the site: https://www.achieve.com/debt-consolidation
OUTCOME
Before
Old product page - product-focused
❌ Relays the product features, not the user benefits
❌ Complex jargon like “proprietary speech-clarity technology”
❌ Long descriptions add to cognitive load
After
New product launch - user-focused
✅ Gets to user benefit faster
✅ Less jargon. More tangible, feels real
✅ About what users want to do
✅ Exceeded visitor to order conversion goal with 6%
✅ Wrote Black Friday sale copy:
+860 orders, +97% order conversion (best performing sale)
✅ Delivered +14.1% YoY increase in website traffic (SEO)
✅ Resulted in 34.1% YoY increase in website conversions (SEO)
✅ Smashed 45%+ A/B test result goal with an 87% increase